Improvements to be made

After I finished my first full draft of my music video, I decided that there were some corrections to be made in both editing and filming. These are the notes I made whilst watching my music video regarding the full scene that I had planned on re-filming..

I decided to re-film this scene because although I wanted my video to be a cautionary tale of a descent into drugs, I thought that depicting my artist using a Class A drug like heroin was too much and would possibly put the audience off.